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Post by Elliot Inga on Aug 10, 2013 22:05:52 GMT
Name: Eliot connor inga
Age: 17
Birthday: April 12th
Sex: male
District: 12
Appearance: Elliot has a taned skin. He has black hair and blue eyes. He is a tall skinny guy and muscular. He is wearing a black shirt and dark brown cargo pants. he is also wearing black shoes and a leaf glove.
Persona: Elliot is verry smart and friendly. He was never really was the anti social type of guy. He always loved to get into things and fights. He has always been scard of getting killed
History: Elliot was raised by both his parents. He never got the chance to get to know his mother cause she never spoke to him. As a child he would love to play with others until he had been punched by his brother. He never got to meet his crush in person but every time she pasees by his father calls. He then regeted losing the chance to speak with other kids his age.
As a teenager Elliot just stayed in his room and looked at the others fight just for food. A few months later his mother got sick and she would possibly die. That was when he enterd his name in the hunger games for the first time. Then as he was entering his name he saw his crush entering too as he approched her she was gone. After a few years he keeps on entering his name just to save his mother.
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Post by Bubble on Aug 11, 2013 13:01:07 GMT
First of all, you Persona isn't a paragraph, you need five sentences for a paragraph.
Also I would like to clarify for all that it is improper grammar to have your middle and last name lower case. The first letter needs a capitol.
Your history is also short. What was his home like? Does he currently care for his mother?
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